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An Ex-CIA interrogator with a new life as an acupuncturist must survive Public Enemy No. 1 when her interpretive healing accidentally goes viral and exposes her government-subsidized hideout.

June 10, 2020
A down-on-his-luck videographer breaks his estranged mother out of prison to steal the grand prize from a filthy rich YouTuber – a million-dollar Bitcoin.

May 14, 2020
With the help of his undead lost love, a reluctant store manager must return to the island where she was slain to prevent the escape of a primitive evil before the anniversary of her death.

April 9, 2020
An overnight caregiver and a bored stiff succubus form an unlikely alliance to launch a dark web speed dating site.

April 4, 2020

on When a 75 year old woman manage to hack into CIA, she´s hunted by the hardest cyber-cop you’ll ever find – her own son

Example: When a recipe search results in hacking the CIA, a 75-year-old woman is hunted by the world's toughest cybercop – her son. I hope you find this constructive.
on When two students in a chemistry lab accidentally produces an aphrodisiac , it is inhaled by the two people they wanted to date respectively. Together they must find an antidote but they have no knowledge of chemistry.

The logline is missing the stakes, the reason why they must find an antidote. Reconstruct the logline so the community or I can help. Research: Watch (1992) "Love Potion No. 9" Take care.
on When a guy is frustrated by his life situation he learns that all problems lies with the body, so he learns to have an out of body experience, but when he experiments he leaves the body but doesn’t know how to come back. He has 14 hours in hand before the body will be cremated.

Leaning towards: When experimenting with astral projection, an unhappy with his skin [young man] has 14 hours to find a way back to his physical body before being cremated.
on “In the wake of their caretaker becoming injured, two disabled family members must prove to a social worker that they are best cared for by each other.”

Thanks. Yeah, I had to look at when social workers typically do their checks. 30 days was the number I got back from the interwebs. Take care.
on “A caregivers journal, with accounts of her experience, gets in the hand of a young person revealing many hidden secrets.”

Which war?
on “In the wake of their caretaker becoming injured, two disabled family members must prove to a social worker that they are best cared for by each other.”

It is a fantastic start which grants you the ability to add color based on your story. Example: Two dysfunctional and disabled sisters have 30 days to prove to a social worker the best care is each other when their…
on With a killer on the rampage in forested upstate New York during the late 1960’s, a sensitive young African-American woman must overcome her insecurities to protect her friends and apprehend the deranged maniac.

Leaning towards: Deep in the forests of 1960s upstate New York, a timid African American is forced to defend her hippy friends when a maniac killer shatters their newfound commune.
on In a world where virtual prisons are considered humane, a female inmate discovers she’s part of an elite-driven psychological experiment, and must fight to maintain her sanity and avoid becoming a tool for societal control.

Another angle: When sentenced to a virtual prison, a VR inmate must overcome a brutal elite-driven psychological experiment to expose her captors in order to escape.
on The A group of perfect student decide to describe in a school exclusively for good students. When they started their studies, they’ll find in a place of madness, where the only way to alive is escaping from the wall that covers all the school

Leaning towards: Behind the [dark] wall that surrounds a pristine school, a group of gifted students take a shot at freedom when they discover the academy is not what it seems.
on 🔥💧EMPÍDOCLUS: The sands of time🌪️⛰️ – Movie {🐺}

Example: On a distant planet governed by elementals, an unlikely group of [masters] set out to defeat the corrupt fire… Honestly, the rest of the logline falls under the "Show, don't tell" rule.

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