Penpusher
Posted: 2021-06-04T16:46:21+10:00 In:

A anxious man must decrypt a disturbing, mysterious recurring dream that may hold the secret to preventing the end of the world.

A anxious man must decrypt a disturbing, mysterious recurring dream that may hold the secret to preventing the end of the world.
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    1. Samurai

      Consider the following:
      1. Why him? Who is this anxious protag that can save the world?
      2. Why now – the dreams?
      3. What is the recurring dream? E.g., death of the world via body snatchers, alien invasion – you get the idea. Elaborate on this to orientate the reader.
      4. Think about your baddie’s goal it may strengthen your logline E.g., revenge for the Roswell incident or like in Independence Day – planet harvesters.

      Hope you find this constructive, keep going!

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