An Ethiopian young woman adopted by an Israeli couple wants to find her biological parents.

She couldn’t find them.

Hi tony18,
As my colleague Richiev said, I meant to tell you there is no conflict written into the logline. I suggest you click on the Formula icon at the top of this page and read the content carefully.

Your story is about a young Ethiopian woman who was adopted by an Israeli couple and now she wants to find her biological parents. This story is not interesting like this. Why? Because your lead character is not facing any problems/conflicts/challenges in achieving what she wants. But if for example, the Ethiopian government is not keeping any record of people adopting babies (for any reason), then there is a conflict, a challenge that your lead character must overcome in order to achieve finding her biological parents. Or, if she wants to find her biological parents without her foster parents knowing, that, too, is a challenge she must overcome.

You should think, what is stopping your lead character from finding her biological parents? What are the challenges? The conflict. Then that is the story.

Good Luck

He isn't saying change the lead character's nationality, he is saying there is no conflict written into the logline.