BenGilani

Samurai · 2,070 points

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6 loglines
138 reviews

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A demonic entity uses a teenager to mock the police when they cannot identify and apprehend a serial killer.

January 15, 2023
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An ill-mannered narcissistic teenage boy falls seriously ill with a mysterious disease and experiences life-threatening supernatural activities after he runs over and kills a black kitten in Dubai.

January 7, 2023
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A blind boy who helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer must now prove that he witnessed the crimes and convince the police that a demonic entity is the real culprit behind the recent homicides.

June 28, 2022
When extraterrestrials who believe humans are annihilating the earth by pollution attempt to take a young boy they have bio-engineered to a new planet, the government uses armed forces to prevent this from happening, as they plan to use the boy as a super-soldier.

June 16, 2022
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“When a young boy is possessed by both a Jinn and a Demon, a priest and an Islamic scholar are forced to work together before the entities destroy the kid.”

February 19, 2022
Three outcast friends lead their town’s residents on a perilous journey to save them from terrorists who scheme to enslave their women for the sex trade

August 30, 2020

on After a stern Yardmaster contracts a deadly virus from a baboon sneeze, a spirited young girl must set out across town to retrieve a last rare remedy before her father’s illness worsens.

Hi RailGamm97, Here's how I see it: "To help her father fight a deadly virus he contracted from a wild animal, a courageous young girl must set out across town to retrieve the last rare remedy." I hope this helps…
on “The truth hurts. But sometimes it’s inspirational, scary, sad, funny or anywhere in between. After witnessing the physical and spiritual persecution of humanity, a thirty year old man gradually teams up with others to liberate the earth by combating the sinister forces of darkness.”

Hi Presario2200, Here's how I see it: "A zealous thirty-year-old man must team up with others to liberate the earth from the sinister forces of darkness that are persecuting humankind physically and spiritually.” I hope this helps Good Luck Ben
on Young siblings have to use their very particular set of skills to counter bullying and alienation they’re experiencing after moving to a new country.

Well, it depends on their skills. But the term "particular" + set of skills, is more cinematic I think I'm glad you liked it though.
on Young siblings have to use their very particular set of skills to counter bullying and alienation they’re experiencing after moving to a new country.

Hi pinang, I like your logline as it is. I believe you can make it even more appealing though by playing with the words. For example: "To counter bullying and alienation in the new country they've just relocated to, young…
on A group of 20 somethings are thrown into the gauntlet of messy romance when feelings start to get real between co-workers and unlikely friends.

Hi zdoubs, Here's how I see your story based on your logline: Emotions start to get real between a group of young colleagues and acquaintances and they are thrown into the current of messy romance." I hope this helps Good…
on A dysfunctional young man with a history of being unable to assimilate into normal society needs help in winning a local golf tournament and believes it comes from a talking golf ball.

Hi Donn Curbow, This is how I see it: "To win a local golf tournament, a dysfunctional young man asks a talking golf ball to help him win a local golf tournament." I hope this helps Good Luck
on A divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.

It sounds great. I like it, too.
on A divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.

How about this one? "A self-hating divorcee reigns vendetta against the private investigator he paid to spy on his ex after discovering a romantic relationship between them instead."
on A divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.

Let me read it a few times. I'll get back to you in a few hours. Because I personally wouldn't start with "After discovering a romance has begun". I'll give my opinion or review in a few hours.
on A divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.

You are welcome, my friend. I'm glad you liked it.

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