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WARRIN88Penpusher
Posted: August 23, 20222022-08-23T02:20:38+10:00 2022-08-23T02:20:38+10:00In: War

An American pilot, running from his abusive father, signs up to fight for the Royal Air Force during the Battle of Britain.

An American pilot, running from his abusive father, signs up to fight for the Royal Air Force during the Battle of Britain.
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      BenGilani Logliner
      2022-08-24T23:26:07+10:00Added an answer on August 24, 2022 at 11:26 pm

      Hi WARRIN88,

      Escaping his bitter past, an American pilot joins the British air force to fight the enemy during WWII / during the Battle of Britain, …

      Does the above logline continue with a BUT?

      I hope this helps.

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      • WARRIN88 Penpusher
        2022-08-25T00:42:21+10:00Replied to answer on August 25, 2022 at 12:42 am

        Ah yes, I think it needs it. Will thrash out this concept some more! Thank you!

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          2022-08-25T00:47:53+10:00Replied to answer on August 25, 2022 at 12:47 am

          You are welcome. Good luck.

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