A teenage girl finds out who she is when she discovers that she is pregnant.

SO, we came up with one, after utilizing all your feedback:
Flower is a short film about a teen who has to navigate messy, dysfunctional relationships and the recent discovery that she's pregnant.

Thoughts?

Sorry about your current "environment", but I'm glad you found this site to be helpful, as I have. If that's your first screenplay concept, and logline, you're off to a very good start. You can contact me, and others I'm sure, if you want more "constructive and positive environments elsehwere. I've learned so much from Karel and others here, and our networking started others places before this, so we're out there!

Thanks to you all!!! This screenplay is my first and the environment I'm in doesn't provide much constructive feedback. sharkeatingman....so helpful. Thank you. I really appreciate the time you all took to give feedback.