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I'm assuming that Devon Howard is chief of police (like the character name btw, not sure needed in logline though). I'm fascinated by the concept. Needs more information to grab me though. Left with lots of questions. Why is he losing the troops? Some indiscretion on his part? Corruption, adultery?? Agree with Karel that you need to state a specific aim rather than just winning the war on crime, which doesn't really mean anything and isn't plausible.
Overall, v interesting concept, needs more specifics.
Should never put the name who is Howard a cop..? If so just mention a "cop"
Should never put the name who is Howard a cop..? If so just mention a "cop"
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