A serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.
by CraigDGriffiths · Legend · 12,600 pts
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Hello, I suggest you to start with the standard logline formula that helps you to detect story problems.
for exemple:
"When a delusional taxi driver convince himself he's the exterminator angel, he must avenge his customer's wrongs to save his own soul".
I don't know if this is true to your story but when you put things in this way it's a lot easier to understand the concept and test its potential.
FFF the simple is always the best. ?His motivation is to do gods work. ?But thinks on your version. His sin that he is atoning for could be the trigger of his own insanity.
nice work.... Thank you.
A character that doesn't change will be 2 dimensional and likely make for a boring journey. Your philosophical question aside, why would the audience care about a person doing a "bad" thing and not whom doesn't evolve during the story?
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