A time-traveling hitman wakes up in his next hit anytime he sleeps. When he learns of a remedy that cures fatigue, he betrays the mob in search of their mad-scientist’s invention.

I ?agree with FFF that while the time traveling hit man has been done, time traveling remains a rich vein for drama.

For me, the hook in this logline is that his time traveling is triggered by sleeping; he falls asleep in one "time zone", wakes up in "another". ?I'm intrigued by the set up -- but not by the plot that follows or, at least, not as the dramatic problem is framed.

I hope you will continue to develop and polish the concept..

I ?agree with FFF that while the time traveling hit man has been done, time traveling remains a rich vein for drama.

For me, the hook in this logline is that his time traveling is triggered by sleeping; he falls asleep in one "time zone", wakes up in "another". ?I'm intrigued by the set up -- but not by the plot that follows or, at least, not as the dramatic problem is framed.

I hope you will continue to develop and polish the concept..

Hit man + time travel ?has been done in Looper. There's room for more movies in the same genre but this logline is not clear enough... the logic behind the plot is hard to get for me. I know how hard it is to write a logline for complex scifi movies, just be sure to be straight and logic.