A courageous teenager vehemently exposes her extremist step father in order to pursue an education with the help of a contemporary female saint and together they overthrow the radical mosque.

Hey Alex, Yes I am. I have witnessed a lot from Birmingham too as it happens! I will definitely look into REEL or TALENTVILLE, thanks for the tip and good luck!

Nadia
Good luck with an ambitious script! Try getting some feedback from peers on sites such as WRITE TO REEL or TALENTVILLE.
Are you from London? I'm a Brummy...
Cheers,
Alex M

Hi Richiev,

Thank you so much for you reply and for your help. How about...

Lips That Cry

A courageous young girl exposes her extremist step father in order to pursue an education with the help of a contemporary female saint

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It does sound better I agree! The story follows a young girl who although living in modern day London is very much controlled (inspired by the unfortunate tragedy of Shafelia Ahmed) and how she fights back the oppression. This is still very common in England amongst certain communities, not just far off in Pakistan/Afghanistan etc. I will be creating a one sheet for this and a thirty second trailer to encourage funding and also to help with pitching!