When the gifted young father of a dying child becomes cognitively bound to a stranger with unique abilities, they must race against time to rescue his daughter from the hands of a sinister agency.

Hi guys,

What about this?

"When his daughter is kidnapped by a sinister scientific agency, a gifted father and the stranger to whom he was mentally coupled unite their forces in order to rescue her"

Good idea. I always enjoy a smart supernatural thriller. Definitely agree with Richiev's structure tweak. Also if you're like me, we view most "agencies" as sinister. Maybe elaborate more on it's wrong doing. Hope this helps. Peace

Thanks... I think it's still not quite where I want it to be yet, but I do like the way you've played with the structure. I think I need to mention that the Father and the "stranger" have both been abducted and experimented on... The link is forced on them. Their abduction and discovering the "who and why" behind it, is the greater over all conflict.