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Jean-Marie MazaleyratPenpusher
Posted: June 10, 20132013-06-10T06:04:18+10:00 2013-06-10T06:04:18+10:00In: Public

Abandoned with her two children in a large dismal house, a young woman must fight against ghosts until one day when …

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    1. phoenixx50
      2013-06-20T06:45:07+10:00Added an answer on June 20, 2013 at 6:45 am

      It builds suspense, but I assume a fight against ghosts would be suspense filled. I don’t believe you need the ‘when.’ It makes it awkward.

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    2. Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
      2013-06-20T18:13:58+10:00Added an answer on June 20, 2013 at 6:13 pm

      Hello phoenixx50,

      Thank you for your post.

      This story is about a fight between livings and ghosts, but what happens after “when” cannot be told in the logline.

      The Others in an existing movie(+++) with Nicole Kidman.

      This logline is not the official one. I just wrote it quicly to introduce the topic. The goal is to write a good one. Are you interested?

      if you have not already seen it and you want to know more about it, I recommend you don’t read any summary before you watch it.

      All the best

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