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you have to tell the whole movie in one sentence, and be clear, a production house won't buy it, unless it is clear, not vague. it is too vague again, it has to be something tangible...i get stuck there myself too...good luck...try again...i need a set up then a pay off, a plot? where is your pay off, what do they give up, change, or sacrifice, and then what do they get that changes them for the better and improves their world?
Ok rather then write a new logline. I'll change the arc of history bit to. "all stand between them and a fate which will change the entirety of the ever after"
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