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SorenPenpusher
Posted: May 29, 20172017-05-29T06:01:05+10:00 2017-05-29T06:01:05+10:00In: SciFi

When a lost girl encounters a dictator obsessed with his personal safety she must sacrifice her own well-being to escape his regime.

When a lost girl encounters a dictator obsessed with his personal safety she must sacrifice her own well-being to escape his regime.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2017-05-29T08:49:50+10:00Added an answer on May 29, 2017 at 8:49 am

      I think if would help if you let us know if this took place in the past, present or future.

      Also why does encountering a dictator make her face the unknown? I am not sure how that relates

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2017-05-29T13:31:19+10:00Added an answer on May 29, 2017 at 1:31 pm

      What does “embrace her emotion” mean? ?How does that translate into a dramatic plot, a specific course of action towards an objective goal? ? What does she need to do — not feel, but do — about the situation?

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    3. JayGee Logliner
      2017-07-11T20:28:03+10:00Added an answer on July 11, 2017 at 8:28 pm

      Just an idea……

      When an orphaned girl is abducted by an obsessed dictator’s regime, she is forced to help conceal his location, while secretly plotting her escape.

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