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dcjohn
Posted: October 18, 20132013-10-18T15:52:46+10:00 2013-10-18T15:52:46+10:00In: Public

A gentle golden retriever flips out, I mean FLIPS! OUT! when a squirrel violates his lawn. In seeking justice, he discovers that he can fire handguns, and now he's never taking another No! again.

Gun Dog

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    1. wilsondownunder Penpusher
      2013-10-20T09:53:34+10:00Added an answer on October 20, 2013 at 9:53 am

      Hi,

      Would this be an animation aimed at adults. Is it intending to be a short or a feature. I can tell its a bit of fun, slightly whacky – hence I like it. Maybe you can firm it up. Never takes another ‘no’ from anyone is open ended/unclear. Turn this into a goal. Maybe he sets out to find the Ranger who took him from his family (or something as equally fitting yet random).

      Also. The tone while fun is maybe a bit loose. You could probably state flips out once given you back it up by stating he goes on a murderous rampage.

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