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Ooooohhh.. getting juicier with every post!
Seriously though. I'm immensely grateful for your feedback @dpg and @gilgamesh. Thank you very much. You're really helping me get clear within my process and on what matters to the story and the audience.
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After hospital malpractice leaves her only son permanently brain-injured, an alcoholic mother struggles with her addiction as she tries to come to terms with her son's grim prognosis.
>>> a nice juicy piece of irony
I love stories that tease out and build to an ironical denouement. It takes skill and insight to pull it off convincingly.
But I don't suggest working it into the logline because you are, in effect, giving away the ending, the solution to the dramatic problem.
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