An aspiring actor, his girlfriend, and his best friend move to the big city. However, he can’t seem to get away from his intrusive mother.

Does the mother follow him there ? Does the Mother cause him to lose his girlfriend ? lose jobs ? Is this a comedy ? A coming of age film ? hard to include everything , but it needs a bit more to tell us what it is about

If the story is bout an aspiring actor then the logline need not detail his friends and allies. Additionally this concept seams to be a lacking a plot.

What does the main character want and how will he try to achieve it? What is his flaw that he must overcome? What is the inciting incident that sets him off on his journey to achieve his goal?

Hope this helps.