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Story is conflict, I am not seeing much in the way of conflict.
Good critique dpg, I was just going to write: 'The End', which is what I do when people give away the whole story including the ending :) but you beat me to it.
This logline gives away the ending:
"The two must learn what it's like to be parents. Luckily, they have the support of their new neighbor and their families."
The general rule is that a logline should never give away the ending.
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