The Pope’s Hit List
Rutger OosterhoffLogliner
When in the year 2030 IS takes over the world, the Pope escapes justice by going back in time with a hit list that can prevent all future holy wars.
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“When ISIS conquers the world, the Pope must travel back in time to assassinate their future leaders to prevent the coming religious catastrophe.”
Yes, this logline is more to the point. How about this:
“When IS conquers the world, a conclave of cardinals send a puppet Pope back in time to assassinate IS future leaders and prevent a religious catastrophe.?
or simply this:
When ISIS conquers the world, a puppet Pope must travel back in time to assassinate their future leaders and prevent a religious catastrophe.?
What do you think?
I think both those logline tries add a new element, (That the pope is just a puppet) without really increasing the word count. Both would work.