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Reincarnated as a baby who kept his memory into the world of sword and magic, former shut-in mid age scientist sets on a mission to live a meaningful life, only to find out that his former boss who caused the accident and killed them both has been reincarnated aswell and is set on repeating the planet threatening experiment again. (Epic fantasy book novel)
Trying to shorten it futher. “After his boss kills them both, a former shut-in scientist reincarnated with his memories in a sword and magic world, must stop his menace finding a way to repeat the deadly experiment that could destroy…
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An ex-gambler wrestling with addiction, is forced to win back her daughter by playing her abusive mother in law in a winner take all game of poker.
I absolutelyy love this logline/story. If you can make the logline even better, great!!
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A dog makes his way back home to his owner after they’re separated in a bombing during the Korean War.
Make it against all ods. Maybe. "After being separated in a bombing during the Korean War, an injured Chihuahua -- through inhospitable mountains -- makes his way back home to his owner." But not sure the sentence construction works.
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During the Holocaust, a 10 year old german girl must convince everyone she know’s that the Romani gypsy girl she is hidding is just an imaginary friend.
I think this could be a great story. And your logline isn't bad either.Although the pros here could probably make it better. Best, Rutger
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A young lawyer discovers through the diary of one of his ancestors that his family has served an ancient vampire for generations, so he must decide between succumbing to power and greed or doing the right thing and losing everything.
"...helping him turn an entire nation into his hunting ground.." makes the antagonist oiut of him.
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After losing the love of his life in the streets of India, a homeless teenager participates in the TV show: Who wants to be a millionaire to find her again.
Film: Slumdog Millionaire (2008)
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After losing the love of his life in the street of India, a homeless teenager playing all or nothing for the jackpot in ^Who wants to be a millionare?" is just one phonecall away from finding her.
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A matriarchal media company CEO summons a troubled male escort to her plush New York apartment for the afternoon, beginning a cat and mouse game of deception with an alarming secret beneath
You should uncover in a subtle way what the cat and mouse game is all about." beginning a cat and mouse game of deception with an alarming secret beneath", tells me nothing. I guess the question is "what is the…
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Three characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE
I was going for both. See my original logline we are discussing here. I did some extra research. You can't be Schiz.and MPD (these days called DID) at the same time . It is one or the other The main…
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A closed-off artist tries to leave her old life behind without attachments, when an anonymous one-night stand goes hilariously wrong and the protective wall around the painful memory, isolating her, begins to crack.
Ok, I get it this is what we call a Tragicomedy. When the one-night stand of a formerly abused artist goes hilariously wrong, she decides to front-on face her fears by doing stand-up comedy.
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Amid an increasingly deprived and poverty stricken human society, a group of young cows herd together to take down the UK government whose constant bickering and failed policies are corrupting their land and threatening their families lives.
What precise incident triggers them to take action?
