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This looks more like a synopsis for a film. A logline is the premise. Try the invaluable "Our Formula" page, to understand the structure of a well-structured logline.
What is the lead character's goal?
Is the lead's goal to make a film? or
Is the lead's goal to win a film contest?
Also, what event sets the story in motion?
You say the lead character is obsessed (I assume?he is obsessed to make a movie)
However, why didn't the lead make a film last year?
Why didn't the lead wait until next year?
What event made the lead take action today? (Instead of yesterday or tomorrow)