Good logline?

by Luce · Logliner · 120 pts September 30, 2018 361 views

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Two friends balance school, careers and relationships along with their partying lifestyle.

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Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts September 30, 2018

Two friends balance school, careers and relationships along with their partying lifestyle.-- The End

Mike Pedley · Legend · 13,410 pts September 30, 2018

Please read the 'Our formula' page.

This doesn't have an inciting incident, a protagonist, a goal, it sort of has stakes (although they don't make sense - school and career... surely if they're students they don't have careers?)... in short, and I apologise for being blunt, no this is not a good logline.

Good logline?

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