What is the most important for you; to be free despite you may lose, or stay as a slave despite you may win? It’s your own choice not the cold wire

by mmowafi77 · Penpusher · 20 pts March 7, 2019 273 views

Categories: Noir

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Mike Pedley · Legend · 13,410 pts March 8, 2019

A logline is supposed to sum up the whole plot in as fewer words as possible so a reader can understand clearly what the story is about.?Check out the "Our formula" tab for more help on how to write one. Currently, this is more of a tagline and doesn't actually tell me much about the story at all.

Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts March 7, 2019

A philosophical question is not a story.

Who is the lead character?
What do they want?
What's standing in their way?

What is the most important for you; to be free despite you may lose, or stay as a slave despite you may win? It’s your own choice not the cold wire

2 reviews

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