Adam Griem

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on A drug addicted rich kid breaks into an unsuspecting college students parents home who is home from college due to a just diagnoses of severe diabetic. The situation takes a turn for the worse as a hot shot negotiator tries to prove himself rather than save the girl, who falls into diabetic shock slowly as the hostage taker battles withdraw symptoms. The ending of this terrible situation is tragic and carries swift punishment, no one will ever be the same.

I tried to put irony in the second draft by having the hostage not care about his life... Originally I wanted the hostage taker to be the protagonist and the negotiator be the antagonist, then I decided maybe the hostage…