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It’s all fun and games at the cemetery for a twenty something gravedigger clinging to his youth, until his ex-girlfriend’s Mafioso father plots revenge for disrespecting his “little princess.”
My question to you is: what's all fun and games? It's so vague.
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A young couple become intruders in their own home after they discover it’s being shared by a couple who look exactly like them.
You tell us why they become intruders, but how? ?Does the couple who look exactly like them hunt them throughout the house? ?Or is there another force at work?
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Two brothers, Logan and Michael, are forced to fight against the Irish Mafia due to their father’s debt.
Maybe it's just me, but this doesn't stand out as much as it should. It's a crime drama, right, but I don't feel anything from this logline. Is the father dead, is he alive? Does he want to pay the…
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Being shot in the head is different for one young woman who lives in the moment, since instead of dying, she receives the responsibility of keeping heaven and hell from falling apart, or else an evil far worse than anyone can imagine will destroy everything and everyone.
I would like to know how she got this responsibility?
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When a troubled American expatriate is offered work at the Tengen Hotel, he soon discovers that Tokyo’s most exclusive hotel is also the base of operations for a major crime syndicate. Now embroiled in their conspiracy to appropriate control over the city, the expatriate must choose between duty or sentiment as both his mettle and loyalty are put to the test.
Updated for like the third time. Check it out! :)
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When a troubled American expatriate is offered work at the Tengen Hotel, he soon discovers that Tokyo’s most exclusive hotel is also the base of operations for a major crime syndicate. Now embroiled in their conspiracy to appropriate control over the city, the expatriate must choose between duty or sentiment as both his mettle and loyalty are put to the test.
I cover all that in script but if you really want to know the main character's backstory, I'll gladly tell you.
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When a troubled American expatriate is offered work at the Tengen Hotel, he soon discovers that Tokyo’s most exclusive hotel is also the base of operations for a major crime syndicate. Now embroiled in their conspiracy to appropriate control over the city, the expatriate must choose between duty or sentiment as both his mettle and loyalty are put to the test.
I have updated it so take a look!
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When a troubled American expatriate is offered work at the Tengen Hotel, he soon discovers that Tokyo’s most exclusive hotel is also the base of operations for a major crime syndicate. Now embroiled in their conspiracy to appropriate control over the city, the expatriate must choose between duty or sentiment as both his mettle and loyalty are put to the test.
A diaspora is basically an immigrant and there isn't a specific thing he must do to prove his loyalty. And I'm gonna be totally honest with you, this log line barely covers half of the script which is a television…
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In a futuristic society where the new government forbids humor, a brilliant stand-up comedian and his group of clumsy clowns must overthrow the iron rulers and bring back laughter before the Thought Police humor washes the population.
Could having humor on the Thought Police force be some kind of corruption?
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When three young men apart of the lad sub-culture beat up a civilian and steal his friend’s camera, we become a fly-on-the-wall as we see what drives these three young men to do what they do as tensions arise as the night winds down, it leads to an implosion which devastates the community around them.
I see this as 'A Clockwork's Orange' in found footage. I wouldn't minding seeing that.
