Alexpsmith

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When two missing teenage girls bodies are discovered, an unlikely pair of detectives must race to solve the case before more people dissapear.

June 16, 2015
When the grandmaster of all gangs is killed, The Warriors are labeled as the culprits, now with every gang in the city after them they must battle the streets to clear their name and reach home turf of Coney Island.

June 16, 2015
When a robbery goes awry a dishevelled brother is found by mentor Nate Williams and put to work in the game, but as eager criminal factions battle for control he must fight to save his community.

June 16, 2015
When a cohesive power ends and is replaced by rampant drug dealing, a resolute crack team must bring a savage war in the streets to a end.

June 16, 2015
When a Chicago shootout is witnessed by two wily male musicians they must travel by train disguised as show girls to evade capture.

June 16, 2015
When a series of unsolved murders turn up in a remote part of spain in the 1980’s, two ill – matched detectives must solve a cities darkest secrets revealing the shocking truth.

June 16, 2015
When a genetically spliced dinosaur breaks loose on a island theme park, a emotionally defunct women must be resurrected and save the day

June 16, 2015
When a series of murders play to an old rock tune, a emotionally scared detective must delve in to the singles market to elimate suspects or else become the next victim.

June 16, 2015
When education is privatised, a resolute teacher must delve into a world of shady dealings between the government and a pharmaceuticals company to prevent a world takeover.

June 16, 2015
When a doomed hippy benefactor turns up dead, a vengeful rapper will hunt down his friends killers in a quest for freedom, fortune and fame.

June 16, 2015

on When the grandmaster of all gangs is killed, The Warriors are labeled as the culprits, now with every gang in the city after them they must battle the streets to clear their name and reach home turf of Coney Island.

When a unsuspecting street gang are accused of murdering the head gang leader chaos breaks out now with every gang in the city after them they must fight to clear their name a reach home turf Coney Island. The Protagonist…
on After a series of volcanic explosions and earthquakes unleashes the ‘Shaadowars’, a race of monsters born from the depths of the world. The human race who inhabits the world has waged a brutal war for survival. An Australian Knight unsuspectingly teams up with a young Aboriginal boy who has the key to ending the devastating war and drag the world back from darkness.

Hi.......It all sounds pretty cool.....It just needs tweaking Try When a intrinsic young Aboriginal boy meets a wounded Knight after a savage battle against a new breed of terror the "Shaadowars" they must consult the elders and banish the foreign…
on When two missing teenage girls bodies are discovered, an unlikely pair of detectives must race to solve the case before more people dissapear.

Hi... Which method do you Prefer???? Yes i agree Iam using the Insighting Spec Protag Objective Stakes. But Karel class of 2014 uses Flaw, Function, infighting, Goal,Shadow and Stakes.... Which do you use???
on the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form. Than decide to compete for the soul of a novice priest with his destruction being the ultimate prize.

What happens when the competing 7 deadly sins capture the novice priest?? Ultimate prize is not clear enough to the audience. Spelling mistakes??? Goodluck :)
on When a series of unsolved murders turn up in a remote part of spain in the 1980’s, two ill – matched detectives must solve a cities darkest secrets revealing the shocking truth.

Ok.....I shall repost it as a Classic.....
on When a series of unsolved murders turn up in a remote part of spain in the 1980’s, two ill – matched detectives must solve a cities darkest secrets revealing the shocking truth.

I admit Darkest secrets and Shocking truth are just observations at best with no real specific information. A game of throwing vague mysteries and random secrets.........Obviousley not. Marshland is a current film have you seen it??? 2 Detectives are on…
on When a Chicago shootout is witnessed by two wily male musicians they must travel by train disguised as show girls to evade capture.

No i believe that it is a opportunity to write up your favourite Classic movie log lines...... Billy Wilders script obviousley is way ahead of it's time. Jack lennon and Dean Martin are hilarious. Cheers.......The Original.
on After they are wrongfully accused of murder, a street gang struggles to get back to their home turf — as every rival gang in the city pursues them.

Perhaps more information would reveal the Storyworld better. Try When the grandmaster of all gangs is killed, The Warriors are labeled as the culprits, now with every gang in the city after them they must battle the streets to clear…
on When an over-curious hunter tragically disappears, the local townsfolk begin unravelling the legend of a fearsome predator stalking the rugged gorges of the River.

Overly curious is a bit simple...............It is kind of like say a detective stumbles on to a crime. Look for a mental, social or psychological feature to heighten the characters arc. There must be Conflict and Change. Which River be…
on On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

Thanks for your feedback. Switched Order. Chiseled Vocabulary. Added Verbose. :) Cheers ;)