alice wattsmith

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When an ex-horseman makes a deal with satan, a diverse army of supernatural beings are summoned into the realm and The Four Horsemen are called to take them down.

March 22, 2013

on When a small-town father is framed for murder and sent to jail, a young lawyer strives to prove his innocence.

It's not a very captivating concept, adding a goal to your log line can help with this.
on Barack Obama is a powerful president by day and crimefighting superhero by night and when presented with the opportunity to change he must decide whether it will be for good or evil.

Where's the goal? a decision isn't a goal.