alldisneybaby
Penpusher · 150 points
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Hello, I commented above as "Jeff" because I had yet to make an account, but I just wanted to say it wasn't a horrible idea! It just needs to be clarified/fine tuned.
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It's a little wordy.. And somewhat confusing, I'm not quite sure what the story is going to be about, if that makes sense?... Sounds creative, just confusing! Best of luck! -Jeff