Anthony Nelson

Penpusher · 190 points

110 points to Logliner

8 loglines
2 reviews

When humanity decides to commit planetary suicide to escape the woes of post-apocalyptic life, a team is assembled to infiltrate and defeat the terrorist militia group standing in the way of nuclear self-annihilation.

October 9, 2020
An entire town wakes up with dissociative amnesia and is told to be a part of a voluntary social experiment; when one member of the town begins to suspect they are being held against their will, he launches a secret investigation to rediscover his past.

May 20, 2019
On the verge of quitting his job to get married, a presumptuous man gets curiously rejected when proposing to his girlfriend and therefore hires a private investigator to investigate her reasons; but when he discovers that the PI has been following the wrong girl all along and feeding him false information, he must learn to listen to others selflessly before his girlfriend discovers that she’s being investigated.

June 13, 2017
When a man’s marriage proposal is curiously rejected, he secretly hires a private investigator to investigate; but when the PI ends up following the wrong girl, the man must learn to differentiate fact from fiction to get to the truth.

June 10, 2017
When his mysterious girlfriend rejects his marriage proposal, a bewildered man conducts a secret investigation to discover why.

June 10, 2017
When a man’s marriage proposal is curiously rejected, he secretly hires a private investigator to investigate; but when the PI ends up following the wrong girl, the man must learn to differentiate truth from fiction to win his girlfriend back.

February 1, 2017
When a man quits his job to get married, only to have his proposal curiously rejected by his girlfriend, he secretly hires a journalist to help him investigate.

January 23, 2017
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When a marketing agent’s marriage proposal is curiously rejected by his girlfriend, he secretly hires a starving journalist to investigate.

January 9, 2017

on After accidentally causing the death of her boss, an over-worked, guilt-ridden barmaid must avoid suspicion, while at the same deflecting the advances of her lascivious co-worker

Well-written. I think the logline would benefit from specifying how the barmaid caused the death of her boss. "After accidentally poisoning and killing her boss, an over-worked... etc" Additionally, though this is a more minor point, I think the actions…
on A quirky, slightly neurotic Seattle novelist becomes her own worst enemy when she falls in love with an inveterate ladies’ man.

I think it would be more ironic if the protagonist was a strong "feminist" (to contrast against a presumably sexist ladies' man). And I agree with the others that as of now she lacks a clear goal. Is she trying…

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