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When a snake attack threatens his species with extinction, a sheltered kangaroo rat must embark on a perilous journey to unite his colony with another, 250 kilometers away.

August 12, 2020
Fired and dumped, a directionless young man takes a pizza delivery job, but when he is mistakenly given the kiss of death by a psychotic mafia boss, he must outsmart the mob to survive and save the love of his life.

April 19, 2020
A smart but directionless food delivery boy is mistakenly given the kiss of death from a psychotic gangster and must outwit the mob in order to survive and get his life back on track

April 8, 2020
When a down-on-his luck food delivery driver inadvertently delivers the kiss of death to a troubled drug lord, he must use his street knowledge to navigate himself out of the criminal underworld in order to survive.

March 26, 2020
A desolate fugitive is forced out of hiding when his vengeful ex-partner in crime kidnaps his son.

March 24, 2020
A reclusive, homesick fugitive is told that his son has gone missing. When he also discovers that his vengeful ex-partner in crime has tracked him down, he must come out of hiding in order to protect his true identity and save his son.

February 4, 2020
After his vengeful ex-partner in crime recruits his son for a dangerous heist, a reclusive fugitive must come out of hiding and take his place in order to save him.

January 15, 2020
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After abandoning his family, a reclusive fugitive must come out of hiding in order to save his son, who has been kidnapped by his vengeful ex-partner in crime.

January 13, 2020
After discovering he has a son, an exiled gangster must confront his vengeful ex partner in crime, in order to save the family he abandoned.

January 7, 2020
After discovering that his mother is dying, an exiled gangster turned priest must reconcile with the family he abandoned; but when his vengeful ex partner in crime threatens their lives, he must choose between his faith and his family.

September 14, 2019

on When a snake attack threatens his species with extinction, a sheltered kangaroo rat must embark on a perilous journey to unite his colony with another, 250 kilometers away.

To be honest I hadn't even thought of that. Perhaps... Veagle was the name I gave them too! His backstory: He was captured by humans and kept illegally as a pet- had his wings clipped and can no longer fly.…
on When a snake attack threatens his species with extinction, a sheltered kangaroo rat must embark on a perilous journey to unite his colony with another, 250 kilometers away.

My thinking for the hero's mission- he has to persuade a group of golden eagles to fly the remaining colony south on their upcoming migration (the eagles would much rather eat them all)
on When a snake attack threatens his species with extinction, a sheltered kangaroo rat must embark on a perilous journey to unite his colony with another, 250 kilometers away.

both great pieces of feedback Maybe there's an elder kangaroo rat in the colony who somehow came from the distant colony, but the others dismiss him as mad and say its impossible, but the hero believes him. I was thinking…
on With the help of his undead lost love, a reluctant store manager must return to the island where she was slain to prevent the escape of a primitive evil before the anniversary of her death.

Imaginative! What significance does the 'anniversary of her death' have in relation to the escaping of the evil? What is it about the main character that makes him the only man for the job? Does the undead lover enlist his…
on A smart but directionless food delivery boy is mistakenly given the kiss of death from a psychotic gangster and must outwit the mob in order to survive and get his life back on track

Thanks for your advice Craig. I've done a rewrite that includes a MPR: When a smart but directionless pizza boy is mistakenly given the kiss of death by a psychotic crime boss, he must outrun the mob to survive, but…
on After killing its progeny as part of an initiation hunting family ritual, a man and his teenage son must protect themselves from a horrid beast that hunts in the dark and feeds upon human skin.

With regards to the beast hunting only at night- are the father and son stuck somewhere they can't easily get away from, or can the night time have more of a significance? I'm thinking of Quiet Place, Birdbox and It…
on After a childhood of abuse, a young woman decides to write a memoir to help her heal.

In order to raise stakes and obstacles, I'll tell you where my mind went straight away with this one. Perhaps the main character is older, and is starting to get dementia. She has carried this burden with her all her…
on An overnight caregiver and a bored stiff succubus form an unlikely alliance to launch a dark web speed dating site.

I would like to see some description of the two characters that give us an indication as to why they have both decided to go on this adventure together. Other questions I have are:What are their intentions for setting up…
on After receiving a private invite to compete,? five amateur cooks find themselves trapped by elite cannibals and must cook to win in order to survive.

As dpg asked, what are the details involved with not surviving? Perhaps its a competition with stages, and the loser becomes the main ingredient for the next dish, only the participants don't realize it at first. To me this idea…
on When a down-on-his luck food delivery driver inadvertently delivers the kiss of death to a troubled drug lord, he must use his street knowledge to navigate himself out of the criminal underworld in order to survive.

When a down-on-his luck delivery boy is inadvertently given the kiss of death when delivering pizza to a mafia boss, he must use his street knowledge in order to survive and find the true target of the hit.

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