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Alright. I'm clearly outnumbered. While I do put those themes in the script, the themes would not be shown in a Wikipedia synopsis, or at leastvery little would so to speak. Looking through it again I see it more than…

The story is that Romeo and Juliet were once together and madly. The thing that separates them is what also created the zombies, an experiment led by Romeo. It's also in this that he betrays Juliet by killing her brother.…

Unlike Pride and Predjudice and Zombies, which is the exactly Jane Austen story with zombies shoe horned in (as well as being aimed as mire of a comedy as far as I know), this script is more like Oh Brother…

I guess my hook is for the people hearing the logline to ask why. To hint that there is a reason that the famous star crossed female lover suddenly wants revenge but not say it would allow the listener to…

Problem is Nir Shelter, it's not a comedy. The screenplay is more of a plain ol' action with a dash of deep Shakespearean thinking.

So this is I guess what you could call a second draft: In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on revenge fueled rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

You got a great concept there. I suggest though that you add a hint as to either why he retired too old for this shit or dramatic backstory) or hint at the connection of why the detective himself must be…

Thank you. If I wrote the script any other way, that would be perfect.