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It’s February 1930, just months after Black Tuesday. In light of their financial woes, a small-town mortician and his arrogant wife start murdering the rich to keep their beloved funeral home afloat.
Great story idea. I would change a few things: 1) Relocate setting to big city (more $$, more bodies) 2) Change date to end of The Great Depression (banking getting better = fewer bodies) 3) Make the wife the antagonist,…
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When the best players of a intergalactic war computer game are hunted down by an alien bounty hunter, the survivors must band together to fight both on earth and in the game to win a very real space war.
Tag Line: a war simulation so good, it’s real…
Too similar to 'The Last Starfighter."
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After being sold to the intergalactic highest bidder, humanity has one year to vacate planet Earth. Tom, short on cash and influence, must find a way to move his family before “Forceful Evictions” begin.
Great ideas. Let's get started with an outline, then first draft.
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Forced into a rural witness protection location, a five star city chef meets someone who teaches how to cook, using simple, humble, ingredients, and love.
After entering witness protection, his cover is blown due to his popularity as a country cook. Must fight after the mob finds him out. Michael Corleone goes to Italy, but I'm telling the chef's perspective, after witnessing the murder.
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Forced into a rural witness protection location, a five star city chef meets someone who teaches how to cook, using simple, humble, ingredients, and love.
While in a rural location under witness protection from the mob, a five star chef is introduced to cooking with simple, humble ingredients, and love. Only then, is he willing to stand up for what is right. *After Michael Corleone…
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After being sold to the intergalactic highest bidder, humanity has one year to vacate planet Earth. Tom, short on cash and influence, must find a way to move his family before “Forceful Evictions” begin.
Earth is not destroyed. Sold = You! Get the f@ck out. Intergalactic Stock market...Ebay...Crap game...Earth is no longer a place humans are aloud to live. "must find a way..." Is intentionally vague (presidential daughter kidnapping is a possibility. Thanks.) Staying…
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After being sold to the intergalactic highest bidder, humanity has one year to vacate planet Earth. Tom, short on cash and influence, must find a way to move his family before “Forceful Evictions” begin.
Hunted and killed with extreme prejudice. Not sure what other 'ticking time bomb' to add as a motivator.
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After being sold to the intergalactic highest bidder, humanity has one year to vacate planet Earth. Tom, short on cash and influence, must find a way to move his family before “Forceful Evictions” begin.
I want it to parallel The Grapes of Wrath, but set in the distant future. Humanity is in the first generation of interstellar space travel, but limited to the very wealthy, connected, and risky. Space travel is available to everyone,…
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A reformed thief decides to help his reclusive brother, court his dream girl, when he discovers she’s the daughter of a wealthy investment banker.
You should specify 1) what type of thief the brother is 2) which brother is after the dream girl 3) where is the hurdle to overcome.
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Johnny falls in love with a girl at his school but she’s dating a rich, spoiled and hot guy. Johnny becomes depressed but his adopted older brother is coming back from a boarding school and he broke up with his girlfriend soon and is seeking out ways to get a new one.
It's a little wordy and muddled as to who the protagonist is and what they want to accomplish.
