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In 1950’s Los Angeles a vengeful rookie DA learns to think like the notorious criminals he prosecutes in order to bring justice to the Southland.

July 19, 2015
When a rookie DA’s carrier is almost derailed he redeems himself when, through an old journal, he emerges into an alternate timeline and receives much needed advice from a legendary prosecutor nicknamed The Gasser

July 19, 2015
With crime running rampant in Los Angeles, a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost a of a once famed long dead prosecutor, era’s clash as they fight to bring justice to the southland.

June 15, 2015
With crime running rampant in Los Angeles, a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they both fight to bring justice to the southland.

June 13, 2015
With crime at an all time high in Los Angeles a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they fight to bring justice to the southland.

June 12, 2015

on When a heartbroken virgin is seduced and humiliated by a movie star she decides to take matters into her own hands.

When a heartbroken virgin is seduced and humiliated by a movie star she decides to take matters into her own hands. "to regain her dignity and make him pay" or something like that. It just needs a conclusion. great logline.…
on With crime running rampant in Los Angeles, a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they both fight to bring justice to the southland.

I tried again. Plus thank you all again!!! When a rookie Los Angeles DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of a once famed prosecutor era's clash as justice is served in the southland
on With crime running rampant in Los Angeles, a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they both fight to bring justice to the southland.

Thank you. That is all part of the story line for the one hour drama. This is Television. I tried again with : When a rookie Los Angeles DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of a once famed…
on With crime running rampant in Los Angeles, a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they both fight to bring justice to the southland.

When a rookie Los Angeles DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of a once famed prosecutor era's clash as justice is served in the southland
on With crime at an all time high in Los Angeles a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they fight to bring justice to the southland.

LOL ok I am new to this sight and sorry if I keep posting variations but I really appreciate the input and I feel I am very very close to a great logline for LA Miles. the show is based…
on With crime at an all time high in Los Angeles a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they fight to bring justice to the southland.

With crime running rampant in Los Angeles, a desperate rookie DA starts receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of once famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny and together they fight to bring justice to the southland.
on With crime at an all time high in Los Angeles a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they fight to bring justice to the southland.

With crime running rampant in Los Angeles, a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of once famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they both fight to bring justice to the southland.
on With crime at an all time high in Los Angeles a rookie DA begins receiving unsolicited advice from the ghost of famed prosecutor DA J. Miles Lenny as they fight to bring justice to the southland.

Thank you both very much! Here is the original that I tried to whittle down. The pilot is written and I will be pitching it the end of July. Would love to have a dynamite logline... After finding an old…

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