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on A young journalist must turn detective when he gets caught up in the fatal conspiracy behind the Jack the Ripper murders.

Hi, I'd say be more specific in your revised logline - we connect and care about the main characters you present. In this you have some potentially gripping but then the stakes are generic - more lives are lost -…