Bateserade

Penpusher · 35 points

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When his agency deems his position obsolete, a schizophrenic assassin goes on the run in hopes to outwit and survive his pursuers.

September 12, 2012

on Two young girls with revenge on the brain, in the Big Apple, there’s no telling how big or painful their bite will be!

I like the first part of the logline. Sets up for some nice mayhem. However, I do not know whom/what these girls are seeking revenge upon. If New York is essential to the plot line, then keep it, but I…