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on Two young girls with revenge on the brain, in the Big Apple, there’s no telling how big or painful their bite will be!

I like the first part of the logline. Sets up for some nice mayhem. However, I do not know whom/what these girls are seeking revenge upon. If New York is essential to the plot line, then keep it, but I…