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Bio-engineer , Frances Cho, awakes from cryogenic sleep, to discover the spaceship’s oxygen supply has been sabotaged, and something is killing the sleepers. Low on oxygen and disorientated, Cho has to stay wide awake if she and her comrades are to survive.
She's the first person to awake before the scheduled time but by middle of the film , she won't be the only one awake .
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Bio-engineer , Frances Cho, awakes from cryogenic sleep, to discover the spaceship’s oxygen supply has been sabotaged, and something is killing the sleepers. Low on oxygen and disorientated, Cho has to stay wide awake if she and her comrades are to survive.
Valid comments BUT - the goal of a logline isn't to tell the whole story but to just to give the hook, the reason to watch it, to suggest the genre it is in, and what the thrust of the…
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A desperate father, forced to hijack a plane by terrorists who have his kids, must outwit the resourceful air marshall on his trail after his flight is cancelled and all the passengers are sojourned to a cheap airport hotel.
This logline is confusing because it suffers from trying to tell too much of the story at once. The TMI rule applies here. If there's TMI then we need to chop some elements out. I think we don't need to…
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A miner investigating a vein of gold must bring his team of five back to safety when a string of seemingly paranormal occurrences drives the men to insanity.
I would shorten it further & dump the 'seemingly paranormal' and replace it with 'freakish' or 'strange'. I think the first option is scarier. Your logline suggests a horror-thriller genre [correct me if I am wrong], so tight and scary…
