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on A once successful landowner with picture perfect family, suddenly finds himself at the mercy of his arch-rival, forcing him to juggle single fatherhood with reclaiming his livelihood and dignity.

I think it would be a better logline if you could specify a few things: - Who is the arch-rival to the protagonist? ?Another landowner? Someone else? Without knowing this, it's hard to picture what he's up against, how high…