BlakeH

Penpusher · 50 points

250 points to Logliner

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2 reviews

When stranded in her partnerâ€™s old ski village on the anniversary of his disappearance, a distraught woman must finally kill the old thing that’s been lurking in the snow.

July 8, 2020

on A desperate father, forced to hijack a plane by terrorists who have his kids, must outwit the resourceful air marshall on his trail after his flight is cancelled and all the passengers are sojourned to a cheap airport hotel.

Hi, I'd put a little less detail in the 'forced to hijack a plane' section because it feels a little irrelevant and top-heavy by the end.
on When firefighters are sent out to battle a raging bushfire, an evil spy in their midst must go rouge to help stop the fire.

Hi, I think you meant 'rogue' instead of the colour!