wlubake

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on A no-nonsense matriarch helps her estranged husband beat his alcohol addiction and repair their marriage for the sake of her son’s sanity, after he invites a homeless boy – who thinks he is Peter Pan – to live with them.

I'd also ask who invites the homeless boy into the house? Is it the son or the father? Your logline also appears set up for the mother to be the protagonist, though she seems to have the least to do…