Britney Pringle

I'm glad we're discussing character flaws. Working out the flaw for the candle maker has been a bit of a challenge for me. My initial idea was that she is impulsive, always rushing into things without thinking them through. Over…

Thank you so much for all your help. I have a much better understanding of my logline now. :)

Hello Richiev, Thanks for taking the time to respond. Here's another one of my attempts: "A candle maker with developing magic powers must enter a dark realm of monsters to rescue her kidnapped twin brother before an evil sorcerer uses…

Hello Nir, Thank you for your feedback. I've been wrestling with getting this logline down for a while. Both twins have latent magic powers over light that get stronger throughout the story. The brother's powers just happen to manifest first,…