Cade

Penpusher · 65 points

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After three teammates are killed in separate incidents during a mission, an elite surveillance operator struggles with being labelled as a magnet of doom by a fellow operator simply because all three men were in close contact with him just before they died.

December 19, 2014

on Sophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.

How about this? "A brilliant female engineer working on an isolated wind farm encounters a sinister force during a ferocious windstorm and fights to maintain her sanity." If there's a link between the sinister force and the research project then…
on A 13 year old little brother had grown up around the lives of crooked cops, gangsters,corrupted politicians, a broken family, and a brother who is hated by them all. Will the little fella help his brother, abandon him, or do absolutely nothing?

How about this? "A teenage boy who grew up in a family of criminals and corrupt politicians struggles to choose between the only life he knows and coming to the aid of his beloved older brother, a man totally opposed…
on In a city where gangs rule the streets and fight each other for food, water, shelter, guns & ammo, and territory. On the outskirts of the city is where utopias of no crime is around, but for how long? These gangsters have been treated like nothing by these politicians, who dump caviar and gold like nothing, they control the police departments, government, and the people. A group of close friends met a police officer who knew how to drive the politicians out of power, but they first had to stop their own city from tearing itself apart.

How about boiling it down a bit. "In a futuristic dystopia, a group of young radicals and a sympathetic policeman, battle to overthrow the local power structure before the city tears itself apart".

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