Catalina

Penpusher · 105 points

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3 reviews

Created by a spirit of life and death, she must find a way to convince him she is worth the life he gave her before he takes it back.

January 26, 2016
When spirits attack her town, a young girl must pair up with a faceless spirit that will help her settle a dept between the spirit world and the humans in order to save her kingdom.

January 13, 2016
Long ago mankind created beings believed to be perfect, and are now worshiped as gods. But when a man discovers their secret, he begins to question their divinity.

July 24, 2015

on A distrusting psychic interrogator, who steals information by entering a suspect’s mind, becomes infected by a recent suspect’s consciousness and must team up with his inner demons to stop his mind being taking over .

Very interesting, I like the fact that he has to teem up with his inner demons.
on In the claustrophobia of a haunted flat, an immature voodoo sorcerer makes a terrible choice when he calls upon his dark gods to seek revenge for a broken heart.

Perhaps you should take out the first part about where the incident occurred, I don't think its necessary to include that. That way you can add something that will actually contribute to the plot. hope this helps :)
on A blood thirty time traveller frames a pretty vampire for murder. She has to prove his guilt or she and her clan will die.

Stating that he is blood thirsty shows you what kind of character he is, I like that. But It is unnecessary to say that she is pretty.