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on A woman stands up one man for another because he is nicer, so she thought. She soon discovers he’s a serial killer and her life depends on the first man to send that psycho to hell.

The "protagonist" has no consequences stacked up against her. She also has no goal. Why is she doing this? Readers can already tell she'll be a flat character. WHO THE STORY IS ABOUT, WANTS SOMETHING VERY BADLY BUT MUST DO…