ChristianDoran

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On the brink of instantaneous cloning technology a physicist makes a deal with an old friend for the key to his theory in return for a clone of his wife, but when the cloning goes wrong and his wife begins to forget who he is he must find her clone and decide which version deserves to live.

July 23, 2015
When a young computer prodigy discovers he exists in a virtual world, he reprograms reality to save his father with cataclysmic consequences.

June 26, 2015
A microbiologist and his son discover a new strain of mind controlling fungus in the deepest mine on earth, now they must stop it from getting to the surface and infecting the world above.

June 26, 2015

on On the brink of instantaneous cloning technology a physicist makes a deal with an old friend for the key to his theory in return for a clone of his wife, but when the cloning goes wrong and his wife begins to forget who he is he must find her clone and decide which version deserves to live.

Here's a different version - A physicist makes a deal with an old friend for the key to his cloning technology in exchange for a clone of his wife, when the cloning goes wrong and the technology is stolen he…
on When a young computer prodigy discovers he exists in a virtual world, he reprograms reality to save his father with cataclysmic consequences.

Okay good stuff. Does this clear it up and get it away from the matrix? An orphan teenager discovers he is living in a computer simulation, he reprograms his life so that his parents are alive but it sets off…
on A microbiologist and his son discover a new strain of mind controlling fungus in the deepest mine on earth, now they must stop it from getting to the surface and infecting the world above.

The ant one is exactly what it's based on.
on A microbiologist and his son discover a new strain of mind controlling fungus in the deepest mine on earth, now they must stop it from getting to the surface and infecting the world above.

Thank Nir, that helps a lot. Making the inciting incident an event rather than 'They found out'. Good stuff!