Digital_Chimera

Penpusher · 75 points

225 points to Logliner

on A young man travels onto the astral plane in search of his girlfriend to discover he must battle a demon that has trapped her soul there.

How is this?: A suspended lawyer meets an enchanting woman in a bar who introduces him to a drug that enables him to astral travel to other worlds for hours at a time. One day he overdoes on the drug…
on A night club owner struggles to control her newfound powers while she battles interdimensional beings who seek to tear a hole in the fabric between our world and theirs.

Thanks for your comments. I went with "struggles to control" because the powers are difficult to control like Jean Grey struggling with the Phoenix powers in X-Men. She can manipulate life energy: chi, prana, etc. Her own and those of…
on Sophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.

How about?: On the night of a ferocious windstorm, a headstrong engineer encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever. There shouldn't be much exposition in the logline. You kind of want to…