EmmaMcK

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When a 2 star Michelin chef is blackmailed by a cannibal, he must source the finest of human flesh for a feast to beat all feasts, or risk the cannibal revealing a secret that will ruin his credibility and his business.

March 6, 2016
When a vintage cowboy doll’s status as favourite toy is threatened by the arrival of a brand new space ranger action figure, the cowboy tries to assert his dominance but his jealous antics get them both lost while moving day looms closer and closer.

March 1, 2016

on When a 2 star Michelin chef is blackmailed by a cannibal, he must source the finest of human flesh for a feast to beat all feasts, or risk the cannibal revealing a secret that will ruin his credibility and his business.

Here is a shorter version to meet the under 25 words rule. Would love people's thoughts! When a Michelin chef is blackmailed by a cannibal, he must source the finest of human flesh, or risk revealing his career-destroying secret.
on When a tsunami wipes out the island where a villainous pirate’s treasure is buried, he must turn to more conventional methods to fund his retirement.

This is a really funny premise. I want to see where it progresses :) I kinda like the mystery of "more conventional methods" but I also like the lameness of getting a job at Walmart. I guess it depends on…
on When an abducted news reporter’s ransom remains unpaid, her timid stalker must infiltrate a ruthless kidnapping ring before she’s executed.

Is the news report or the stalker the main character? The stalker has the main action so it sounds like he/she is the main character. It's also a little confusing as I thought at first that the stalker might have…
on When a magic trick turns fatal on one of their wives, two magician friends turn rivals to create the ultimate stage illusion with dangerous consequences. The Prestige

This made me want to watch it again!! It's not clear here who the protagonist is. It also sounds like they turn rivals so they can create the ultimate stage illusion (together?) but in actual fact as a result of…

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When a 2 star Michelin chef is blackmailed by a cannibal, he must source the finest of human flesh for a feast to beat all feasts, or risk the cannibal revealing a secret that will ruin his credibility and his business.

When a vintage cowboy doll’s status as favourite toy is threatened by the arrival of a brand new space ranger action figure, the cowboy tries to assert his dominance but his jealous antics get them both lost while moving day looms closer and closer.

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