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Penpusher · 90 points

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3 loglines
4 reviews

A young medium is tasked with cleansing an old mansion but the spirits would kill to protect their dark secrets.

November 29, 2019
An old, abusive slave owner switches body with his slave who gives him a taste of his own medicine

November 28, 2019
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November 28, 2019

on A young medium is tasked with cleansing an old mansion but the spirits would kill to protect their dark secrets.

Yes, she is a con artist . No powers or abilities but I thought logline are suppose to be 25 characters long how can I fit all of that info into one line
on An old, abusive slave owner switches body with his slave who gives him a taste of his own medicine

This logline thing new to me. Thank you for the feedback
on Trapped inside his house with a malevolent ghost, a father must protect his family, whilst the ghost, who turns out to be an old foe, sets out to play each family member off each other.

I like the idea I think that making it more ironic will help
on When bank robbers and their hostages encounter a backwoods family, they are held captive for a sacrificial ritual, and must work together to escape before becoming human cattle.

Give a more detailed logline. I like the irony of the victimizer becoming the victim