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An orphan developing strange powers is unaware that an alien force needs to destroy her if they are to succeed in invading Earth
Just testing a new version of my logline for a feature script.
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A young woman in search of her parents finds herself in a fight for her life when an extraterrestrial warrior believe her to be a legendary weapon created to defend against the invader.
Thanks DPG for the help, How could she not know growing up she's not a normal human?? The idea here, she's pretty normal looking with none of her real abilities show until she's older (when the story starts).? She's always…
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A young woman in search of her parents finds herself in a fight for her life when an extraterrestrial warrior believe her to be a legendary weapon created to defend against the invader.
A new possible logline: During her search for her parents, a tenacious young woman is hunted by an extraterrestrial warrior who believes her to be a legendary weapon capable of defending against the invader.
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JC a 10-year-old boy genius in Outback Australia overcomes life’s endless hardships and grows into a man solving his community’s problems using his great intellect. In the process, he becomes the towns, Wet and Dry Goods Merchant, Pharmacist, Dentist, Optometrist, Mayor, Honorary Anesthesiologist, and romances his Childhood sweetheart along the way.
History unfold through the perspective of a 10 year old? genius in Outback Australia when he grows to become the towns Pharmacist, Dentist, Optometrist, Mayor and more but the real challenge is childhood sweetheart who's not not easily impressed.
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A young aid worker tormented by his dreams learns humanity has been manipulated for aeons. Only by accepting the past does he have a chance to save the future, humanity and the people he loves.
If it's too generic Happysnapper then it doesn't do it's job at all.? Right now there is no reason to find out more about it because it doesn't do anything to hook you.? A logline should sell your story, not…
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logline critique
I'm a little confused on this one, who is the cop try to keep the kidnapping victim alive?? Seems strange a kidnapping victim from a murder case, so the victim was killed?? Need a little clarity on this in my…
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(Short) A down on his luck and jaded 20 something who robs a bank on Christmas eve meets a little girl who is convinced that an Old Man in the bank is Santa Claus.
Not sure why the down vote.?? I've notice a lot of down voting lately, not exactly the best way to encourage people in my opinion.? I know some of the loglines posted are a mess or completely ignore anything about…
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A desperate Mexican single mother, looking to win back custody of her son living in America, kidnaps a US border guard and uses him as a coyote, unaware that her hostage is the Homeland security secretary’s nephew.
One of the things a movie has to do is pull you into the world in which they exist.? I'm having a hard time understanding how any of this would work. ? How does kidnapping a US Border guard win…
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That psychedelic drug would be developed by the person who cooked it getting to the highest purity range In the planet,in/on each individual will be processed differently and this is what alarms the person because it’d mean the reality on this world that the consumer is expiriencing COULD change.An entity would change it,anentity that uses the connection that occurs when the receptors in the brain receive the substance molecule(which can be related to all psychedelic drugs known to mankind including “the god’s molecule”) as it’s path to communicate with the person(man or woman).
thriller/enhancer/ introspective/suspense
(don’t think about stealing it or filtering it…this entity will know…I AM THE OWNER).
I'm not sure if this is for a script or just spam from a pharmaceutical company trying to sell cheap drugs.
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The hunter becomes the hunted when a woman lures her
abusive husband into a death trap. (Short Script, 7pages)
Your right, the short story I did write has conflict in it, which would be the stakes.? I think I was thinking more alone the lines of 'Big' stakes, like found in action movie.? And yes a logline's soul purpose…
