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“They say first impressions are the most important. Luckily, twelve-year-old geek, Gordon Periwinkle gets a second.”
A reluctant geek looks to create a new image when he is the new kid in school. After he fails miserably, he gets a second chance to re-live that week, this time he takes a completely different path while fully knowing the outcome of each previous decision.
Agree with variable. Where are the stakes in this story? Also, how is he given a 2nd chance and why is that relevant to the story?
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The true story of how a motley crew pulled off England’s biggest bank heist only to discover they were set up by MI5 to retrieve scandalous photos of a royal person.
"What, really, is lost by not designating a protagonist? " I proceed that a log should suggest to a star talent what the story would mean for them if they were to sign up. I don't like mentioning "shady used…
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After her student goes missing, the teacher in-charge sets up a “search and rescue” with his best friends before their field trip ends.
I would set up the environment first, While on an extended field trip... Or, Before the conclusion of their field trip... ...has until the parents expect them to return.
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I hate to ask but…
I would usea comma instead of a period and cut it to 1 line. Why mention they are adopted when they can discover that in story? Two desperate sisters must travel across the country to locate their biological relative who…
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During a wedding rehearsal, a bridesmaid is taken by pirates and becomes the prize of the battle of ego vs revenge between two of the most powerful pirate ships.
In the sequel does Johnny Depp crash the wedding?
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The true story of how a notorious Jewish counterfeiter saved his life by cooperating with the Nazis in the largest counterfeiting scheme in history.
The true story of how a Jewish counterfeiter trades his services for freedom from the Nazi war machine.
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A hunter/slayer hybrid woman takes on the world’s monster in her normal life Seattle, which changes when she meets a sorcerer who is cursed to live in the shadows.
By monsters, she battles Cali Liberals, right?
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When a fragile single girl wins a holiday vacation at 28, she has 3 weeks to go into a meaningful relationship or risk relapsing into depression
A 3 week vacation? What a great win! That alone should help with the depression.
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After learning his mother is dying due to lack of healthcare coverage and money, a promising med student abruptly quits school to compete in a dangerous TV show offering $1 million to the lone survivor who is still alive at the end of the game.
He is billed as a promising med student who can't help his own mother medically, but rather playing in a game of death instead? I guess his med skills aren't too good.
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An alien politician whose world was colonised by humans must fight a corrupt system and a supremacist organisation to rise to the top.
The audience would need to identify with the aliens over the humans. How could you pull that off easily? Even Avatar had the aggressive human side provide the protagonist.Be careful you don't write this as an anti-human story, unless you…
