frankraj

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A disillusioned Catholic priest, the illegitimate son of a billionaire becomes the first American Pope, overturning Rome’s age-old canons. The first Pope to resign in 600 years, he abdicates the pomp and power of the papacy, to return to the woman he loves.

July 20, 2019

on A Tremulous young mother who’s children have been taken from cps must escape her abusive husband and get her children back.

I wouldn't use the word 'tremulous' - doesn't do justice to what could be a powerful story. Desperate, determined, frantic are better options.